Honestly great for a demo has SOO much more potential and refinement then games made for a year. Combat is unique and actually fun, excited to see where it goes. Don't get bothered by negative feedback, people just wanna see this project live. You'll get great feedback so long as you actually update the game in decent intervals XD. My only suggestion would be to add growth scenes, guessing you're already gonna do that though
I will try to add growth scenes in the future. A lot of people are wanting that (me too) so I'm gonna do my best. It's just hard for me with AI because I want consistency but still I will try
I suggest you to do the transformation more gradual. Let the girls grows more slowly and add the transformation sequence, will be great. Good Job to start, very good
I can realy see some potential in this game, from the visuals there is nothing to complain about and the story has a good goal. Keep it up und mach weiter so!
With all due respect, many of the twists and turns in the current storyline feel so sudden that I don't quite understand the characters' personalities and actions yet. The combat system is simple and clear. But the above is not important, I think the most important thing is that the FMG game still lacks some description of girls' muscles and strength, and the process of muscle growth and enjoying power is directly ignored.
I've planned that the player learns more and more about the story and background while progressing. For sure there are a lot of questions open, but it's just the prologue and that's intentional. Else my story writing inexperience is at fault :(
And I will try to include more descriptions of muscles and strength in the future but can't guarantee how well I can perfom. Same with the process of muscle growth.
I will try to add more artworks and sprites in the future if I can manage it. I'm just too picky when it comes to consistency and I'm just an average AI User. I will try what I can :)
Its really a cool game! The storytelling is quite interesting, starting off with dark and mysterious then later on being funny and wholesome. And the combat system is fun, not to hard and not to easy. The characters are unique and intriguing. The prologue was a perfect preview for whats coming next and Im looking forward to see more updates of it.
Nice game, but really? Did you get inspired by my game (Power World)? The amount of similarities I found between yours and mine are quite a lot, really. In fact, in the game there is a character that looks exactly like one of mine. (They even wear the same clothes). If so, it was fine, I don't care either. It just caught my attention. Keep it up XD
Hey, it's true that I really like your game but any similarities are really coincidences. Thinking about it, you are right that the red haired girl really wears the same clothes as your Lava :0
That was great. I really enjoyed this. The story so far was well thought out as well as the characters. And i liked that combat system was very simple looking and yet a little difficult at the same time cause you actually had to think about the choice of skills you make. Huge thumbs up from me. Looking forward for more
My goal was to make the combat not too hard for the beginning but still making the player think and not putting in skills blind. I just hope I can make it harder and more strategic in the future :)
I really like your girl too! But it's such a coincidence that they look that similar. When I was thinking about a swimmer character I just wanted to make her look gloomy and thought about the color blue :D
Henlo, I've finished available content, so here is my "reveiw":
I absolutely adore consistency and clean look in character sprites, it's important in such content for me, so big win here so far (maybe except muscles, they have usual "web-like" looks from veins). I'd love to see a few more sprites per character, it will add so much for the player, because going through walls of text might be boring if sprites are changing not that much.
Some of the music is pretty good, not even too much AI sounding.
Somehow I'm interested in the story, it makes me interested in some future reveals, so I guess it works)
Also, small thing about character positioning (I think you just missed this during development): two of them turned out of the frame without no narrative reason, so just flipping them vertically would make scene feel better.
I really wanted to make the characters look consistent. I would love to give them more sprites but I'm just an average AI User and don't really know how to change poses while keeping the outfits the same. Especially for details AI is changing the design every generation. (And I wouldn't be satisfied if the outfit details changes mid dialogue)
About the positioning, I surely could flip them vertically if needed, I'm just not sure if people would look too much in details and realize then, that asymmetrical outfits and hair styles are flipped to (e.g. in the screenshot Elvira wears her thigh strap around her right leg and after the flip it would be around her left leg)
You are welcome <3 About flipping spirtes: I believe it's better to create a better looking composition where characters looking on each other than sacrificing this to the fact that strap will end up in the other leg. If the left/right feature of the character is flipped it won't bother many people I believe, but wierd looking scene will. Tho, it's my personal opinion, it's up to you.🤙
This is a really good start and I can tell with those 15 minutes that it has a lot of potential! Especially for your first game, this is super impressive!
The storytelling is great, love that mix of serious and wholesome. The combat system seems interesting and not too hard to grasp, I hope the difficulty won't come from them being too RNG based.
I don't know if you already have the story and general content in mind, or if you're going with the flow, but try to plan ahead what you want in your game and stick to it. Many devs fall in the pitfall of implementing every cool ideas they have, and they end up with way too much work (especially when you work alone!).
Best of luck and I can't wait to see what you have in store!
That's great! Beautiful characters, good style, interesting plot. The size of the other characters at the end looks promising! The music is good too. The game has only one downside - I want more :)
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I just finished playing through it has to be one of the greatest fmg games there is please keep updating it.
This game is great!! I hope you continue developing it :D
Just a question, what image generator did you use?
Thanks ^^
I'm using stable diffusion.
Dude I beg you make it available for Android or make it playable for browser plss.. pretty please?
I tried making an android version but can't guarantee that it's working like intended ^^"
It's uploaded, so you can try it out.
Very very good, lots of potential, hope to see an update soon!
Thanks! ^^
I'm working on it but my progress is very slow... So the update probably will take a while but I'm doing my best!
Really great demo so far. One of the first visual novel-type games that got me interested in the combat also. Very excited to see where this goes 👀
Thanks, I'm glad that you like it ^^
I will do my best for the upcoming content!
Can you make a browser version?
Hey, I will try when I finished the next version. That probably will take a while but I will definitely keep that in mind!
Honestly great for a demo has SOO much more potential and refinement then games made for a year. Combat is unique and actually fun, excited to see where it goes. Don't get bothered by negative feedback, people just wanna see this project live. You'll get great feedback so long as you actually update the game in decent intervals XD. My only suggestion would be to add growth scenes, guessing you're already gonna do that though
Thanks for the feedback :)
I will try to add growth scenes in the future. A lot of people are wanting that (me too) so I'm gonna do my best. It's just hard for me with AI because I want consistency but still I will try
Was expecting a growth scene too bad
But visuals are good, looking forward to more
I will try to add growth scenes in the future ^^
I suggest you to do the transformation more gradual. Let the girls grows more slowly and add the transformation sequence, will be great. Good Job to start, very good
Sequences are hard to do well with AI.
There are a lot of Creators that did this
I will try but can't guarantee it. I'm kinda picky when it comes to consistency and I'm just an average AI User. Still I will try my best ^^
I can realy see some potential in this game, from the visuals there is nothing to complain about and the story has a good goal. Keep it up und mach weiter so!
Thanks for the nice words ^^ I will do my best
With all due respect, many of the twists and turns in the current storyline feel so sudden that I don't quite understand the characters' personalities and actions yet. The combat system is simple and clear. But the above is not important, I think the most important thing is that the FMG game still lacks some description of girls' muscles and strength, and the process of muscle growth and enjoying power is directly ignored.
Thanks for the feedback :)
I've planned that the player learns more and more about the story and background while progressing. For sure there are a lot of questions open, but it's just the prologue and that's intentional. Else my story writing inexperience is at fault :(
And I will try to include more descriptions of muscles and strength in the future but can't guarantee how well I can perfom. Same with the process of muscle growth.
I will try my best ^^
A bit exposition heavy currently. but I look forward to seeing where this one goes.
I will try to add more artworks and sprites in the future if I can manage it. I'm just too picky when it comes to consistency and I'm just an average AI User. I will try what I can :)
Can you make a version that's playable in browser thie game looks really fun and I would love to play it
I will keep that in mind and think about it ^^
Its really a cool game! The storytelling is quite interesting, starting off with dark and mysterious then later on being funny and wholesome. And the combat system is fun, not to hard and not to easy. The characters are unique and intriguing. The prologue was a perfect preview for whats coming next and Im looking forward to see more updates of it.
Thanks for the feedback :)
I hope I can deliver the story the way I roughly planned it and that people will like it
Nice game, but really? Did you get inspired by my game (Power World)? The amount of similarities I found between yours and mine are quite a lot, really. In fact, in the game there is a character that looks exactly like one of mine. (They even wear the same clothes). If so, it was fine, I don't care either. It just caught my attention. Keep it up XD
Hey, it's true that I really like your game but any similarities are really coincidences. Thinking about it, you are right that the red haired girl really wears the same clothes as your Lava :0
I swear that made my head explode, but it's okay, don't worry XD
That was great. I really enjoyed this. The story so far was well thought out as well as the characters. And i liked that combat system was very simple looking and yet a little difficult at the same time cause you actually had to think about the choice of skills you make. Huge thumbs up from me. Looking forward for more
Thanks for the feedback :D
My goal was to make the combat not too hard for the beginning but still making the player think and not putting in skills blind. I just hope I can make it harder and more strategic in the future :)
P.S: Lexi, the buff girl in black-blue swimming suit looks so oddly familiar :D
Haha trueee
I really like your girl too! But it's such a coincidence that they look that similar. When I was thinking about a swimmer character I just wanted to make her look gloomy and thought about the color blue :D
I absolutely adore consistency and clean look in character sprites, it's important in such content for me, so big win here so far (maybe except muscles, they have usual "web-like" looks from veins). I'd love to see a few more sprites per character, it will add so much for the player, because going through walls of text might be boring if sprites are changing not that much.
Some of the music is pretty good, not even too much AI sounding.
Somehow I'm interested in the story, it makes me interested in some future reveals, so I guess it works)
Also, small thing about character positioning (I think you just missed this during development): two of them turned out of the frame without no narrative reason, so just flipping them vertically would make scene feel better.
Thanks for the feedback and advices :)
I really wanted to make the characters look consistent. I would love to give them more sprites but I'm just an average AI User and don't really know how to change poses while keeping the outfits the same. Especially for details AI is changing the design every generation. (And I wouldn't be satisfied if the outfit details changes mid dialogue)
About the positioning, I surely could flip them vertically if needed, I'm just not sure if people would look too much in details and realize then, that asymmetrical outfits and hair styles are flipped to (e.g. in the screenshot Elvira wears her thigh strap around her right leg and after the flip it would be around her left leg)
You are welcome <3
About flipping spirtes: I believe it's better to create a better looking composition where characters looking on each other than sacrificing this to the fact that strap will end up in the other leg. If the left/right feature of the character is flipped it won't bother many people I believe, but wierd looking scene will. Tho, it's my personal opinion, it's up to you.🤙
can you make android version?
I can try but can't promise it.
Furthermore I can't guarantee if it will work like the PC version.
ok
This is a really good start and I can tell with those 15 minutes that it has a lot of potential! Especially for your first game, this is super impressive!
The storytelling is great, love that mix of serious and wholesome. The combat system seems interesting and not too hard to grasp, I hope the difficulty won't come from them being too RNG based.
I don't know if you already have the story and general content in mind, or if you're going with the flow, but try to plan ahead what you want in your game and stick to it. Many devs fall in the pitfall of implementing every cool ideas they have, and they end up with way too much work (especially when you work alone!).
Best of luck and I can't wait to see what you have in store!
Thanks for the feedback and advice :)
I will keep that in mind. I'm already trying to hold back my inner perfectionism else I will be never able to finish anything.
That's great! Beautiful characters, good style, interesting plot. The size of the other characters at the end looks promising! The music is good too. The game has only one downside - I want more :)
Thanks for the feedback :D
I wish I could give more but it will probably take a while ^^"